parima (parimauk.multiply.com)

I want to talk
I want to walk
I want to go,to deepest forest that I know
then
I want to sit
and just think and think and think
then
wright and wright and wright..

I want to go.
London.Winter.2006.Parima

[breathless]

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erfaningenia wrote on Dec 7, '06

Your poem was alive, and it's sensible for me, because you know what's the vita!

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artistguy wrote on Dec 7, '06

That is what I usually do.

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parimauk wrote on Dec 7, '06

erfaningenia said

Your poem was alive, and it's sensible for me, because you know what's the vita!

نه سرا می خواهم
نه طلا
نه نگینی بر انگشتری عهد عتیق
نه لباسی فاخر
نه کلامی به ریا و پُر از شهد و شکر،
من فقط سادگی یک گل در گلدان ِ گلی را می خواهم
من فقط پاکی باران را روی یک پرچین دهاتی می خواهم
و دلم سخت هوای جایی در دورترین نقطهء دنیا دارد
تا که خاکی شوم از بغض درون
تا بریزم غم تنهایی خویش
به درون چاهی خشک و سیاه،
و دَرش را محکم میخ کنم.

28/12/1364
Parima

Tehran

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nelsonho wrote on Dec 7, '06

Just do it!

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paloman wrote on Dec 7, '06

Beautiful words!

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quietlaughter wrote on Dec 7, '06

to my dear Parima

walk until you hear
only your own breathing
keep walking until
it is your pulse that thunders
in your ears
then pause
in this solitude
let your soul
write on the centre
of your palm
in tiny script
in loud bold strokes
in a way that is all
your own
and then....
let go....
~
Love you
Leigh-Anne
:X

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parimauk wrote on Dec 8, '06

quietlaughter said

to my dear Parima

walk until you hear
only your own breathing
keep walking until
it is your pulse that thunders
in your ears
then pause
in this solitude
let your soul
write on the centre
of your palm
in tiny script
in loud bold strokes
in a way that is all
your own
and then....
let go....
~
Love you
Leigh-Anne
:X

Thanks lovely....that's wonderful....you know I understand it's the only way for you to save your self and your soul in this horrible world..."save your solitude"

Love you too and always happy to see your word...X

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quietlaughter wrote on Dec 8, '06

parimauk said

Thanks lovely....that's wonderful....you know I understand it's the only way for you to save your self and your soul in this horrible world..."save your solitude"

Love you too and always happy to see your word...X

you're very welcome

:X

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hamisheh wrote on Dec 9, '06

parimauk said

نه سرا می خواهم
نه طلا
نه نگینی بر انگشتری عهد عتیق
نه لباسی فاخر
نه کلامی به ریا و پُر از شهد و شکر،
من فقط سادگی یک گل در گلدان ِ گلی را می خواهم
من فقط پاکی باران را روی یک پرچین دهاتی می خواهم
و دلم سخت هوای جایی در دورترین نقطهء دنیا دارد
تا که خاکی شوم از بغض درون
تا بریزم غم تنهایی خویش
به درون چاهی خشک و سیاه،
و دَرش را محکم میخ کنم.

28/12/1364
Parima

Tehran

من فقط سادگی یک گل در گلدان ِ گلی را می خواهم
من فقط پاکی باران را روی یک پرچین دهاتی می خواهم
و دلم سخت هوای جایی در دورترین نقطهء دنیا دارد
تا که خاکی شوم از بغض درون

خیلی قشنگ بود شعرت
ببینم هنوزم اینها رو می خوای یا بدست آوردیشون و دیگه نمی خوای؟

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parimauk wrote on Dec 9, '06

hamisheh said

من فقط سادگی یک گل در گلدان ِ گلی را می خواهم
من فقط پاکی باران را روی یک پرچین دهاتی می خواهم
و دلم سخت هوای جایی در دورترین نقطهء دنیا دارد
تا که خاکی شوم از بغض درون

خیلی قشنگ بود شعرت
ببینم هنوزم اینها رو می خوای یا بدست آوردیشون و دیگه نمی خوای؟

WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT ME ? MY WORKS DON'T SHOW THAT ...MY PAIN...MY LOVE TO PEOPLE ? MY LOVE TO THE WORLD ?....I NEVER WAS RICH BUT I NEVER THINK I AM A POOR PERSON....YES I GOT THEM ,I SAVE THEM ,I LEARN THEM ....X

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hamisheh wrote on Dec 10, '06

congrate....
:) so well

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parimauk wrote on Dec 10, '06

hamisheh said

congrate....
:) so well

Thanks lovely.

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eppp wrote on Dec 16, '06

This is good. And the words in the thread add to it.

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