 The spruce of your garden
may be remembers the gazes
of the woman who stared at it
all night and day.
The window of your room was my only view
at the time wanting
at the time of pain
or when a lump in my throat...
And the woman in red above your bed
with lustful lips. And the bed in which
each night a fresh body devours
your quickening breath
And still
in the memory of your spruce
your bedroom window
your woman in red
and your breaths
I breathe.
Parima .Tehran.Iran.1988
Translation by Abol forushan
Photo by Nassy Shaybany
| so beautiful... the poem, the photo.. i've no words, just am in awe. |
 | wow, what a great write! The emotion in this is evident, and the rythm is very well put together. |
|  so beautiful... the poem, the photo.. i've no words, just am in awe.  thanks dear,it's one of my old poem, I like to translate my poems ,you know as long as that I discover Multiply ,I did not write the poem any more ! my poems is like my photography , when I can't do painting I write ! but now multiply help me to show my feeling, experience and my observation day by day ! |
| how nice! :) oh thanks ,I missed you ,i like the feeling in this poem it's old but it's visual ! |
| wow, what a great write! The emotion in this is evident, and the rythm is very well put together. thanks pretty ,yes I was so Lucky,you know my Friend who translated this poem ,he,himself is a wonderful poet !he read my poem ,got the feeling of that ,and you see ,outcome was perfect ! |
| thanks dear,it's one of my old poem, I like to translate my poems ,you know as long as that I discover Multiply ,I did not write the poem any more ! my poems is like my photography , when I can't do painting I write ! but now multiply help me to show my feeling, experience and my observation day by day ! yes, I understand, multiply helps me to do the same... thank you for sharing all of these things :-) |
| wahhhh.. that's awesome! sexy parima, why don't you & yr friend post poems to Poetry & Friends website here in multiply.. i'm sure all of us will love you there too..
hugs,
ash Oops !! thanks lovely Ash ! yes some times I am sexy too ! but not at all !you know like every body ,But I prefer put all of my Passion on my images ! So ,thank Sweet,but I don't have time to do that ,but if you like you can do every thing you wont, with my poems that I posted on Multiply!
Thanks
Your sexy parima !!! |
| Oops !! thanks lovely Ash ! yes some times I am sexy too ! but not at all !you know like every body ,But I prefer put all of my Passion on my images ! So ,thank Sweet,but I don't have time to do that ,but if you like you can do every thing you wont, with my poems that I posted on Multiply!
Thanks
Your sexy parima !!! ur such a sweetheart  ! ok, i will link yr poems to poetry & friends, ok. if you got ample time, feel free to create yr entry there.. take care & stay sexy always, ashleea |
| yes, I understand, multiply helps me to do the same... thank you for sharing all of these things :-) you are welcome my love . |
 | eppp wrote on Sep 25, '05 Wow, what a poem! (Poem and picture go well together, by the way.) |
| Wow, what a poem! (Poem and picture go well together, by the way.) thanks eppp, the poems is old ,and it was for somebody I liked him in the past , you know It's one of the first romantic poem I wroth but the photo, is new ,my husband Nassy took that recently . |
| Wow lovely Parima..
what a sweet lovely Poem here as you are
dramatically expressed
congrats!!!!! Yes ,I was deeply in love ! was horrible !!!!!!!! but ,some times you missed that atmosphere! you know ,that feeling ,that passion ! in these times I need rewive my mind and remmamber how much pain I had !!!!!!!!! |
| wahhhh.. that's awesome! sexy parima, why don't you & yr friend post poems to Poetry & Friends website here in multiply.. i'm sure all of us will love you there too..
hugs,
ash I'd be interested in putting some poetry on Poetry & Friends in Multiply. Where is it?
Sure Parima will point me in that direction... Abol Froushan |
 | WOW, Parima !
It was not easy to deeply understand it, even with my dictionary ;-), but I think I understood it enough.
I like it a lot ! Really...
I like this melting of sensuality, passion, melancholy
It's very Woman !
Of course, it must be different in farsi, the words sound differently in all the languages, but I love some of the words - in english in the text (I often love the sound of english language), like spruce, gaze, lustful, fresh, devours, and, most of all... breath !!!!!
I love this word ! his sound and his meaning.
So sensual, so strong, the power of life, the power of the body, the power of the soul, the passion of love, woaw...
The photo is excellent, congratulations to Nassy !
And congratulations to you, of course, my dear friend. |
| WOW, Parima !
It was not easy to deeply understand it, even with my dictionary ;-), but I think I understood it enough.
I like it a lot ! Really...
I like this melting of sensuality, passion, melancholy
It's very Woman !
Of course, it must be different in farsi, the words sound differently in all the languages, but I love some of the words - in english in the text (I often love the sound of english language), like spruce, gaze, lustful, fresh, devours, and, most of all... breath !!!!!
I love this word ! his sound and his meaning.
So sensual, so strong, the power of life, the power of the body, the power of the soul, the passion of love, woaw...
The photo is excellent, congratulations to Nassy !
And congratulations to you, of course, my dear friend. What are you doing here ?! you are brave man Eric ! yes it's very feminine I know, but don't forget was very painful too, painful breath !!!!!
yes I like photo too, I will tell to Nassy !they are more then that ,but I have another project for them ! thanks my dear ,you are so kind some times ! by the way ,I like to have one masculine comment here ! |
| Why painful ?
I suppose I didn't well understand the meaning of your poem.
Actually, reading it again, now, I believe you are talking about a time you were in love of a man who already had another woman (in red) in his life.You were keeping looking at his window or you were looking through the window from inside his bedroom ?
So the breath is the one you're imagining from the other woman ? |
| Why painful ?
I suppose I didn't well understand the meaning of your poem.
Actually, reading it again, now, I believe you are talking about a time you were in love of a man who already had another woman (in red) in his life.You were keeping looking at his window or you were looking through the window from inside his bedroom ?
So the breath is the one you're imagining from the other woman ? See ! you can't get it ! it's easy because, you are a man ! I am talking about love,you are talking about sex ,they are mach but they are different ! I don't like go to the details ,I think if you can get the feeling of that it's ok,yes breath here is the one that I imagining from the other LADIES in this poem !not just one person my dear ! |
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